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| Overview |
All of us have had a teacher who has made a profound difference in our lives—someone
who changed our lives, made us think more deeply, set our feet on the right path.
Perhaps it was a teacher we met in a classroom, but it could just have easily
been a coach, a youth group leader, a family or community elder, or religious
leader. In this project, students write a tribute to such a teacher, someone
who has taught them an important lesson that they still remember. The personal
essays that students write for
this lesson are then published in a class collection. Because writing about someone
who has been a significant influence is a typical topic for college application
essays, the lesson’s extensions
include resources for writing more traditional, formal papers.
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| From Theory to Practice |
Author T. A. Barron states that “There is nothing more heroic than the
teacher who helps a young person discover those vast reserves inside himself
or herself who gives him hope when all seems hopeless, who shows her dreams in
the midst of nightmares, and teaches us all to face fear with strong determination” (11).
Recognizing the importance that a teacher can hold in a student's life,
this assignment
asks students to recall a special teacher and capture that teacher’s message
in a personal essay. Diana Mitchell explains that when we “connect the
work
we
ask [students] to do in school with their own lives, they can become eager, active
participants in their own learning” (79). In successful units of this kind, “writing
. . . is connected to students’ lives” and “issues of student
concern . . . are an important part of the class (83). By providing examples,
modeling the activities, and engaging students in collaborative work, this lesson
incorporates elements of best practice.
Further Reading
Barron, T.A. Letter included in “Dear Teachers: Letters to Another Hero.” Voices
From the Middle 9.2 (December 2001): 11.
Mitchell, Diana (ed.) “Starting with the Students (Teaching Ideas column).” English
Journal 87.3 (March 1998): 79-83.
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| Student Objectives |
Students will
- identify underlying lessons portrayed by an inspirational character in a
reading or film.
- identify a similar teacher in their own lives.
- brainstorm, freewrite, and share preliminary ideas with peers.
- read and analyze personal tribute essays.
- write a personal tribute about someone who has made a significant influence
on their lives.
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| Instructional Plan |
Resources
Preparation
- Gather copies of Tuesdays with Morrie or another book or movie
that includes an inspirational teacher. For purposes of the lesson,
the teacher
does
not
have
to be a teacher
in
the
classroom. A book in which a family or community elder shares a life
lesson with other characters (e.g., A Lesson Before Dying) will
also work. Note also that the teacher-student relationship does not need
to be the primary focus of the story (e.g., Mrs. Crowley in The Earth,
My Butt, and Other Big Round Things).
- Students should have read or viewed the work that you’ve chosen before
this project begins. Students
might read the book as a class, work in literature circles reading different
books in each group, or read novels independently. If you have chosen a
film for this activity, show the film in class and discuss
basic literary elements and film analysis.
- Acquaint yourself with life lessons from Tuesdays With Morrie,
or the book or movie what you’ve chosen. The list for Tuesdays with
Morrie was collected by students. The list that your students create
will probably be different.
- Make copies of handouts: “Dear
Teachers” by
Sonya Sones, Excerpt
from “From sanctuary, to the Teachers,” by Paul
Zindel, and Teacher
Tribute Rubric.
- If desired, make an overhead transparency of Sones’ form.
- Test the ReadWriteThink
Printing Press on
your computers to familiarize yourself with the tool and ensure that you have
the Flash plug-in installed. You can download the plug-in from the technical
support page.
Instruction and Activities
Session One
- Prior to this session, read or watch Tuesdays With Morrie or the book
or film you have selected.
- As a class,
brainstorm life lessons from book or film, creating a list that you can
refer to later. The Life Lessons from Tuesdays With
Morrie includes a list of lessons that were collected by
students for that book. The list that your students create will be
different, but the handout can provide a reference point for you as you talk
about the book or film that you have chosen.
- Pass out copies of Sonya
Sones’ poem “Dear Teachers” or
project the poem using an overhead transparency.
- Read the poem through as a class, and ask students to identify the life lessons
that Sonya Sones describes in the poem.
- Ask students to discuss how the three lessons (one for each teacher Sones
mentions) relate to the final stanza of the poem.
- Explain that students will write a tribute to an important teacher in their
lives, making a comparison to the characters in the book or film that you have
discussed as well as to the teachers in Sones’ poem.
- Students can begin gathering ideas by writing their own poems
in their journals, modeled on Sones’ poem. Begin by asking students
to identify the structural similarities between the stanzas of the poem.
They should easily determine the following form:
To [name of the significant person],
my [role that the person played],
who..... [describe the person’s influence in 3 to 4 lines]
I say ..... [what you would say to the person]
- Ask students to follow the model by filling in the names, roles, and significant
contributions of teachers from their past. Explain that students can choose
anyone who has taught them something. The
people they
choose
do
not
have to
be teachers
in the
traditional sense. A coach, a youth group leader, a family or community
elder, or religious leader who has shared life lessons would also
be appropriate.
- Encourage students to use the form to get their ideas down in their journals.
They need not worry about writing perfect poems at this point.
- Once students have had enough time to write down at least two influential
teachers, divide the class into groups of three to four students each.
- In their groups, ask students to share details about the teachers whom they
wrote about. Emphasize that students are simply talking about the people and
lessons that they wrote about. They do not have to share the text of their
poems unless they want to.
- Groups should provide support and feedback on the lessons that members share.
- Before the end of the session, bring the class together. For homework, ask
students to choose one teacher who was influential in their lives. The choice
can be someone that they wrote about in one of their verses or a completely
different person. As with their writing in the poem, the teacher for their
tribute essay does not have to be a teacher in the traditional sense. A coach,
a youth group leader, a family or community elder, or religious leader is also
appropriate.
- If desired, students can also revise and polish their verses for homework
and turn in copies at the beginning of the next session.
Session Two
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If students polished their poems for homework, collect the poems. If desired,
you might take a few minutes to invite students to share their poems if they'd
like by reading them for the class.
- Explain that during this session, the class will focus on one particular
teacher. Students should have chosen a specific teacher for their tribute
for homework.
- Divide students into small groups. In each group, allow students approximately
two minutes to tell others in their group whom they have chosen to write
about and why. This preliminary discussion is the chance for students to
share
their basic stories with one another. Additionally, it gives students the
chance to think through their ideas a bit before they begin writing. Group
members can ask questions about any gaps or unclear information in the stories.
- After students have shared their stories with their groups, give them
five to ten minutes to do a freewrite
in their journals on the same story they just shared with their groups. Because
they have already talked through their stories, students should be able to
begin writing right away—the process should help eliminate writer’s
block. If you notice any students having problems getting started, quietly
encourage them to just write a first draft of the story they shared
with their groups.
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Once students have a first written draft of their stories, rearrange groups
so that students can share their stories with new listeners.
- In their new groups, students read their drafts aloud. Again, group
members can ask questions about any gaps or unclear information in the stories.
- Give students time after they share their writing to make any corrections
or additions to their tributes.
- Pass out copies of the excerpt
from “From sanctuary, to the Teachers,” by
Paul Zindel, and ask students to read the piece for homework.
Session Three
- Ask students to brainstorm descriptive details from the excerpt
from “From
sanctuary, to the Teachers,” by Paul Zindel. As students share ideas,
write the information on chart paper or on the board.
- Ask students to categorize the information that they have brainstormed
into four categories: (1) information about the teacher herself, (2) information
about the author (Zindel), (3) information about the underlying lesson, and
(4) other details.
- With the list categorized, ask students to talk about the relationships
among the kinds of details that Zindel includes. Guiding questions for the
discussion include the following:
- How personal are the details?
- How are specific details used?
- How are objective and subjective details used?
- How do the details communicate the significance of the memory?
- How do the details talk about the teaching?
- What is concrete information
is taught, and what life lessons are taught?
- Using the information from the classroom discussion, make a class checklist
for the kinds of details that make Zindel’s tribute convincing.
- Ask students to review their own drafts from the previous session, using
the class checklist to guide their reading. If desired, ask students to divide
the details from their own drafts into the four categories used for Zindel’s
tribute; then, ask students to analyze the details and make changes to strengthen
their writing.
- If students find that they need significantly more details, assign the
optional session and independent work so that students can interview the
teacher or someone else who knew the teacher to gather more information.
Optional Sessions and Independent Work
Before the Interview
- Begin interview preparation by asking students to decide whom they
want to interview. If the teacher is not geographically, available, students
could consider interviewing by telephone. Alternately, they might interview
another student or person who knew the teacher. Perhaps a family member or
another student also interacted with the teacher and can provide additional
details, for instance.
- Ask students to compile a list of questions they would like to ask the
teacher they have written about, especially questions that relate
to the lessons they learned.
- Remind students that the more specific the questions,
the more useful the answers will be, using the following example:
Imagine that Paul Zindel interviewed another student or family
member about Miss Stillwell. He might ask questions such as “What
do you remember about Miss Stillwell’s discussion of World War II?” rather
than simply “What do you remember about Miss Stillwell?” The
closer you can match your questions to the lessons that you are exploring,
the more useful the details you gather will be.
- Once they have brainstormed the questions they will ask, pair students
so that they can practice their interview questions with a partner.
- Arrange for students to make appointments to interview the people that
they have
chosen. Be sure that students explain the project and how the information
from the interview will be used.
During the Interview
- Encourage students to arrive on time for their interviews and to be ready
to begin. They should have paper and a reliable pen or pencil for taking
notes. If possible, students should tape the interview so that they can return
to the information easily to fill in any gaps in their memory and/or notes.
- As students interview the people whom they have chosen, ask that they take
time to remind the person of the purpose of the interview, (if appropriate)
to ask if the person is comfortable with taping the interview, and to spend
some time visiting and talking before moving through the list of questions.
- If appropriate for an illustration in the tribute, students can take photographs
of the person and the location of the interview. Remind students to ask the
person for permission before taking and using photographs.
After the Interview
- If appropriate for use in the tribute, ask students to take several minutes
to write a description of the person who was interviewed and the location where
the
interview
took
place. For instance, if students visit a classroom where a teacher taught them
in the past, descriptive details about the classroom might be useful in the
final draft.
- If students have tape recorded the interview, have them return to the tape
and take notes on significant details that can be used in their tributes. If
students
took notes, have them return to the notes and look for significant details.
- Remind students that their task at this point is harvesting details and ideas
from the interview. It is unlikely that they will use every detail in their
final drafts. They are simply gathering ideas.
- With the fresh list of details available, ask students to return to their
drafts and revise their writing, using ideas and specific details that they
gathered in their interviews.
Session Four
- Pass out copies of the Teacher Tribute Rubric, and go over the guidelines
as a class.
- Pair students, have them trade papers, and have them use the Rubric to
provide feedback on each other’s work. Encourage students to provide
concrete suggestions for improvement.
- Based on student need and experience, you might add one or more of the following
mini-lessons that will help students complete their work:
- Students can use any remaining time in the class to make revisions to their
drafts. Encourage students to continue sharing work with partners as they revise.
- Ask students to come to the next session with the final draft of their tributes,
which will be published in a class booklet.
Session Five
- Demonstrate the ReadWriteThink
Printing Press for students, displaying
the booklet templates.
- Ask students to print at least three copies of their work (one for themselves,
one for you to respond to, and (if appropriate) one for the teacher whom
they have written about). If class resources allow, additional copies can
be made to share with interested students in the class. Copies should also
be made for anyone interviewed for the tribute.
- This will be a busy, active session so ensure that
students understand the product they are to submit by the end of the class
before releasing them
to work on their final copies.
- Allow students the remainder
of the class to print copies of their own pages for the class booklet.
- If possible, schedule an additional
class session where students can share their finished tributes with the
class.
Extensions
- As an alternative, students
can use the Letter
Generator to publish “Dear Teacher” letters, similar to
the examples that have been shared during the unit. If appropriate, students
can send a copy of their letters to the teachers they have written about
in their tributes.
- College application essays often ask students to write about a
significant influence, so this lesson plan can provide students with the
opportunity to draft a piece that they can use later as they apply to college. The
following resources can provide additional information to help focus students’ work
on these more traditional, formal papers:
Web Resources
- Commentary: Tribute to My Sixth-Grade Teacher
http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=1329308
- In this National Public Radio commentary, student Anthony
Brooks shares a tribute to his sixth-grade teacher. This audio file provides
another example of a teacher tribute, composed from a student’s perspective.
- Commentary: Ms. Patel, 3rd Grade Teacher Extraordinaire
http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=3046055
- This National Public Radio commentary explores what a parent learned about
education from his son’s third-grade teacher.
- Reading Group Guide for Tuesdays with Morrie
http://www.randomhouse.com/features/morrie/guide.html
- This list of 25 questions covers the main characters (Mitch and Morrie),
death, religion, culture, ritual, and relationships.
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| Student Assessment/Reflections |
Students should have a chance to read the various tributes included in the class
collection. Informal feedback in the class from other students who know the teacher
being described or remember similar lessons taught by another teacher can provide
useful encouragement for students and underscore how audiences react to details
and specific information. Perhaps the best informal feedback a student can mention
is to say, “I wish I had that teacher.” Listen for such comments
as
students share their work and ask readers to elaborate for the author on the
details of the tribute that led them to make such a wish.
For more formal assessment, use the Teacher Tribute Rubric, which student
pairs use to evaluate drafts of their final work. |
3 - Students apply a wide range of strategies to comprehend, interpret, evaluate, and appreciate texts. They draw on their prior experience, their interactions with other readers and writers, their knowledge of word meaning and of other texts, their word identification strategies, and their understanding of textual features (e.g., sound-letter correspondence, sentence structure, context, graphics).
5 - Students employ a wide range of strategies as they write and use different writing process elements appropriately to communicate with different audiences for a variety of purposes.
6 - Students apply knowledge of language structure, language conventions (e.g., spelling and punctuation), media techniques, figurative language, and genre to create, critique, and discuss print and nonprint texts.
7 - Students conduct research on issues and interests by generating ideas and questions, and by posing problems. They gather, evaluate, and synthesize data from a variety of sources (e.g., print and nonprint texts, artifacts, people) to communicate their discoveries in ways that suit their purpose and audience.
11 - Students participate as knowledgeable, reflective, creative, and critical members of a variety of literacy communities.
12 - Students use spoken, written, and visual language to accomplish their own purposes (e.g., for learning, enjoyment, persuasion, and the exchange of information).
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